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this sucks

ok this had nothing to do with the description and when I was watching it I realized I made a huge mistake for I saw your other junk short. Apparently you obviously get some humor off of the idea that people actually watch it. Well newgrounds is a place for ametuers and pros alike to be able to come on here and show their work with everybody. But if this is another practical joke like your last one was then just cut it out allready.

csscblackbelt2000 responds:

Are you sure this had nothing to do with the Autohor's description? Maybe you weren't reading it very focused. You say you have seen my other works...and you still couldn't read what it said? Pretty hopeless to help you now.

woah...hold on...my other one (please specify which) was a practiacal joke? This is news to me!

Great 3d there bud

Awesome 3d there bud I was pretty impressed even with the lighting and shadinging. If your looking for ideas to improve on I would have liked to have seen the zurg's mouth move and a bit better of a " walk " or slither or whatever they do LOL.

cussing at newgrounds people doesn't help

Well first of all letme get a cross that you set off a bad precedence to all of your viewers on newgrounds when you take the time to call us "assholes" it's best not to send a message like that to all of your possible viewers due to a few bad remarks from a couple. Now that that is over I guess I may be an " asshole " cause I do think this short was not very good at all.

ok that was just really .... dumb

At first I thought it was going to be a hilarious spoof off of godzilla and then it just got really pointless and well ... dumb. Looks like you made this thing out of sheer boredom well don't quit your day job.

LeekClock responds:

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not haters ... critics

the first mistake you did is all the anti-hater stuff you had setup before I began watching this flik. It says off a bad precedence and puts in a wrong mood for no one "hates" your work and if you don't like negative critism then you shouldn't submit it to a site where any Joe can review it how he likes. And if you want good reviews then do a good flik. This is not one of the better sprite flik's I've seen.

Yoshiking2 responds:

okay you right about the little remarks before hand and not everyone is happy with all movies that come to this site

Bad voices and overdone jokes

I really wasn't impressed with the voices. Zombiehead was doing a bad impersonated voice of foamy the squirrel from the nuerotically yours series and that mushroom thingy seemed to have taken bad acting lessons from William Shatner. I really didn't laugh at the jokes either cause they were all dumb afgahn jokes which everybody has allready heard before. So therefor I give this short an overall rating for 3 and a 1 out of 5 vote.

Jamicus responds:

I didn't copy foamy's voice, like I've said before, I came up with the ZombieHead voice long before I had heard of Foamy, and yes, the voice may be annoying, but it's not stolen.

All the jokes were Afghan jokes?
I count 3 Afghan jokes, and there were a hell of alot more than 3 jokes in this cartoon.

Good coreography

I really like how the animation was coreographed with the movie as well as it all fit together really good for setting the mood. The fight sequence I was a bit let down on for there was way too many " now why did he do that ? " moves instead of taking advantage of the winning situation. But overall I enjoyed it and would like to see more.

It grows on ya

LOL I don't know how or why but each time I let it replay over and over it gets more enjoyable and I'm afraid the tune is so catchy I'll have it stuck in my head LOL.

Rubbertje responds:

Thank you for the review!

Potential Great on the way

I really love how you used the red and black tones to set a mood for the whole theme as well as a good choice of music for each chapter in this short very well done. You are also very good at capturing the perspective of the scenes really well the only thing that I see needing improvement, which I am sure that many have told you, is graphics ... get yourself some good graphics going and you will be one of the great flash animators. You got the story, sound, plot, and action all lined up and heck even some good intrigue and the red and black tones is a great style only thing missing is the graphics. So even though I've made my 5 votes for the day I'm voting a 4 on you anyways just cause I would love to see you keep working hard and can't wait to see how you improve.

GET SOME BASIC TOOLS!

ok I know I am risking getting slapped with an abusive here but I'm a 56K impaired person and I am writing this review while it is still playing cause it pauses every 2 friggin seconds and then plays for 1 second so PLEASE GET A PRELOADER! I just hope this thing has a replay feature at the end and just doesn't loop while I'm going to the bathroom.

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